Published March 14, 2007
To suffer is
To feel what
You have no wish to feel
To want to sink forever
Into a dark oblivion...
To die slowly,
Painfully
Knowing no one cares
Knowing no one hears you
Feeling like the pain will
Never stop
Because pain like this is all-powerful
Causing you to
Suffer
Like you never have before.
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This poem really caught my eye. I really like its simplicity and straight talk.
Well Done!